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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Why I Hate Liking You

    A basic and slightly familiar poem. Now, as for specific form, I don't see the meter itself. Say... a 6 6 7 6 structure. While sound in meaning, it just ...

    Feb 3, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Evil

    Evil, as in pure 'fiction' evil is not realistic and is often just used to tell the hero side of the story as in some justification or just a means ...

    Feb 3, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Modern Day Outlaw (Ch. 1, pt. 1) Rewrite!

    Sheriff is not a specific name of a badge or hat, no caps on the 'S' please. As for his office, capitalize the O. Contrary to Author13's comment on the ...

    Feb 3, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: StoweAway (Updated 2/12/08)

    Yes, they had newspapers in the 1800s. However, I rather like the way it is written. Since this is a narration by the main character it is perfectly acceptable as ...

    Feb 3, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Temple Of Renaissance-Prologue

    Fearful winds screamed as dark energy concentrated onto into the palm of shady figure. Twirling his hands, he forced the energy into crowds of helpless villagers who were burnt, frozen, ...

    Feb 3, 2008


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